(a) 56 (Love/Passion) You....My Light Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(a) 56 (Love/Passion) You....My Light

Rating: 5.0


I want to become....
A dropp with no thoughts
A stop that no one sought
Nothingness so that I can absorb
Empty so that I can fill
Until
I fill You in
And Illuminate
In Your sight
And
I become Your ray...
You, my light.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 20 February 2007

AMEN! God Bless your prayer...... this is just so beautiful.

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Cyclopseven R 11 February 2007

May your wish be granted and a 10 from me.

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Diane Violet 08 February 2007

This is perfect and beautiful.....................................Diane

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Geoff Warden 07 February 2007

And had this had been said any other way, it would fall short of the perfect poem

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