I just want to keep looking at you
What have you done to me, baby?
Your smile quenches my inner thirst
The spark in your eye lights up my being
I feel alive
Like a germinating seed after a winter freeze
I feel light
Like a butterfly kissing the blushing blossoms
I feel beautiful
Like the full moon getting slowly uncovered
I feel complete
Like the parched earth after a thunderous rain
I am almost afraid to touch you
Lest my dream come to an end
This is gorgeous TO, the imagery is sublime.... Sigh! what a stunning poem! HG: -) xx
Inside the bubble of bliss. euphoric yet afraid, the promise of the kiss, but what price might be payed? Lovely TO Danny
what a romantic poem...i loved it..i liked the last two lines..this poem deserves a super 10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ah but the dream could never end........ I like this for so many reasons....the style is structured well... it flows with an atmosphere of true delight... and the end is perfected puchlined..... top grades on this one......