Herbert Nehrlich

Rookie (04 October 1943 / Germany)

A Bad Poem (Competition) - Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

And when time after time
they grow lemon and lime,
which makes thinking sublime
and leads poets to rhyme
like a Klingenthal chime
in its second year prime.
Playing tunes to the mime
in a garden of thyme -
death by nickel-and-dime
bless mein heim, mein sweet heim.


Comments about A Bad Poem (Competition) by Herbert Nehrlich

  • Nkululeko Mdudu (5/6/2008 4:23:00 AM)

    good use of rhyme, a rhythmic beauty. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/4/2007 6:40:00 AM)

    Great rhyming Herbert, liked its simplicity but meaningful. (Report)Reply

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  • (4/18/2007 10:02:00 PM)

    Good poem. Well penned and structured. Great use of language to rhyme time with about a dozen or so different words. Top marks!
    -Michael
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  • (3/6/2007 11:10:00 AM)

    Guess I missed that competition...LOL! But it's a pretty good poem none the less :)

    KK
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  • (12/27/2006 3:02:00 AM)

    Man, I am going to have to think about entering the competition.

    Your entry is pretty good!

    Dammit, give me a few days. I'm going to have to think about this.
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  • (12/15/2006 1:56:00 AM)

    This is an exceptionally good bad poem. Congratulations Herbie, you're a legend! love, Allie xxxxxxx (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 15, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 9, 2010


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