And when time after time
they grow lemon and lime,
which makes thinking sublime
and leads poets to rhyme
like a Klingenthal chime
in its second year prime.
Playing tunes to the mime
in a garden of thyme -
death by nickel-and-dime
bless mein heim, mein sweet heim.
good use of rhyme, a rhythmic beauty.
Great rhyming Herbert, liked its simplicity but meaningful.
Good poem. Well penned and structured. Great use of language to rhyme time with about a dozen or so different words. Top marks! -Michael
Guess I missed that competition...LOL! But it's a pretty good poem none the less :) KK
Man, I am going to have to think about entering the competition. Your entry is pretty good! Dammit, give me a few days. I'm going to have to think about this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
This is an exceptionally good bad poem. Congratulations Herbie, you're a legend! love, Allie xxxxxxx