Explore Poems GO!

A Bad Poem (Competition)

Rating: 3.5
And when time after time
they grow lemon and lime,
which makes thinking sublime
and leads poets to rhyme
like a Klingenthal chime
in its second year prime.
Playing tunes to the mime
in a garden of thyme -
death by nickel-and-dime
bless mein heim, mein sweet heim.
Nkululeko Mdudu 06 May 2008
good use of rhyme, a rhythmic beauty.
0 0 Reply
Marvin Brato 04 July 2007
Great rhyming Herbert, liked its simplicity but meaningful.
0 0 Reply
Michael Fischer 18 April 2007
Good poem. Well penned and structured. Great use of language to rhyme time with about a dozen or so different words. Top marks! -Michael
0 0 Reply
K K 06 March 2007
Guess I missed that competition...LOL! But it's a pretty good poem none the less :) KK
0 0 Reply
Will Barber 27 December 2006
Man, I am going to have to think about entering the competition. Your entry is pretty good! Dammit, give me a few days. I'm going to have to think about this.
0 0 Reply
Alison Cassidy 15 December 2006
This is an exceptionally good bad poem. Congratulations Herbie, you're a legend! love, Allie xxxxxxx
0 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

6/20/2021 8:11:45 PM #