I think I'd like to go to bed
And stay there for the day
Wallow in self pity
Have courtship with dismay
I think I'd like to drink it in...
The sorrow and the 'pain'
For every ounce of feeling this
I surely must make 'gain'
I shed a tear...from time to time
And that I can't deny
Just do me one small kindness...
Don't ever ask me why
I won't give in completely
I've never been that sort
When sadness threatens inner will
I build a stronger fort
So, please leave me now to grovel
As the blackness takes it's toll
It may nibble at the shell...
But it'll never take my soul!
Dee Daffodil (HW) 01 October,2008
beautiful poem! ....i give it a full rating of 11/10.....amazingly written in such beautiful way that you made me read it once again...do write more of this sort....ciao...and take care
Dee, Absolutely one of your best efforts! One can actually feel your pain while reading this one. B.V.A.
I love reading your poem dear Dee. You compose with full feelings.
Hi Dee. A cracking read this one with great rhyme and rythme throughout. thanks very much for this **10** Regards Dave T
a soliloquy narrated well...longing not affecting self..good write.. Ency Bearis
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poem! ....i give it a full rating of 11/10.....amazingly written in such beautiful way that you made me read it once again...do write more of this sort....ciao...and take care