sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
sarwar chowdhury
Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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A Beautiful Scenery Of Relation

Rating: 5.0
The car is mine; I drive it; It runs; Am I not related with the car speed sitting inside when it runs? yes, the velocity of the car has enveloped me; The body of the car is my body; I must take care of me-car body so that it would not collide with other things on the road.
The speed is me-contained
The speed is car-contained

The car is powerless! It has no choice by itself; Just runs as I drive it; And it is me who stimulates the car but when it runs, it runs together with me; At that time the speed of the car and the speed of mine is one dynamism.

My car is running on the road of the Earth;
The Earth has a velocity; It is running with all phenomenon it has
The speed of the Earth is me-contained, and car-contained too.
What a nice scenery! I am strung with all phenomenon here on the Earth! I am separated but joined, I am enclosed with nature but freed; I am related with all dynamism!
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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 05 November 2008
On a trip by car in a softly nostalgic set and the car is running away...
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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 October 2008
A great work is done. Excellent. Especially, the concluding lines are amazing. 10 from me.
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Colin Jeffery 02 August 2008
This is a very good poem. Great.
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Dr.subhendu Kar 01 August 2008
car still moves when fuelled body moves with the earth unstoppable warmth arrows to dream above and yet unreckoned between the sun and earth....................wonderfully wrought by the imagery 10+, thanks for sharing
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diversity and unity, profound 10
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Mamta Agarwal 20 July 2008
very philosophical write, Bob has really put it nicely. indded a beautiful scenery of relation. Mamta
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Bob Gibson 13 July 2008
I view my body as a vehicle, i am just inside looking out of eyes that see, steering far and wide visualize the control tower, here in my head i will lose my vehicle one day, then i will be dead
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Chitra - 12 July 2008
great compostion, enjoyed reading it
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Jessica Golden 02 July 2008
This is lovely! Thank you for taking your time to inform me on this beautiful poem, I'm so glad you did. Keep up the great work, Sarwar! ~Jessica
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Seema Chowdhury 01 July 2008
well done, nicely expressed your feelings.
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