Eyes so clear, like a wells’ water’s deep
Beauty so profound it’d make a blind man weep
Long for your kind love I’ve sought to seek
Yet unprepared I was, as it’s made me meek
It’s calmed my fire, and quenched my thirst
In front of a bullet I’d put myself first
All of this was done by a few simple words,
You’ve fulfilled my world
By saying you’re my girl
Love in the darkness, I’ve struggled to find
Stumbling around fighting with an unsound mind
Yet you’ve stilled my waters,
You’ve stalled my tears
You’re all that matters
For the next hundred years
All of this was done by a few simple words,
You’ve fulfilled my world
By saying you’re my girl
Bravo Sir Timothy! Such feeling inspired words for such a young heart! Ten! God Bless Sir Timothy! You are a true Poet in the making! Linda
I believe that this poem is my favorite of them all. If you haven't figured it out this is Ami, Go Ravens!
Oh my gosh I love it! Could possible be my new favorite poem on the website.
Very Very well done poem, I look forward to reading others from you, this is the first but I will continue.
Wow dat wuz beautiful! ! keep riting-DLG
poured out from the very depth of your soul- and in your writing, here it doth show1 Great Job! Keeping penning and you will inspire many, or at the very least touch their hearts. I was definitely impressed!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like getting the deed to a gold mine