A Blurred Sun Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Blurred Sun

Rating: 5.0


....a blurred sun
not in the horizon
right on top at noon
...a blurred sun
man is busy making money
not groping in darkness
he has his electric shine...
for how long...and
at what cost....
he will go on...till
his energy level falls...still
he can go on with his pills
no...it is not another threat
mother nature has endured much
she is ready to embrace death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 29 December 2009

The Bible states that there is an end time

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 19 January 2010

Nature is ageing, like us human, but in more catastrophic ways.

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Mamta Agarwal 10 January 2010

bluurred Sun, blurred vision, - you can't trample on anything forever without destroying even if it sustains you. Mamta

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Ramesh T A 04 January 2010

Decision to be taken to save mankind or Earth in the World Climate Change Conference should not be like the decisions taken in World Trade Organisation!

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Kesav Easwaran 03 January 2010

unlike many of your other poems this one grazes the theme tangential...you have succeeded here to project your message prudently and that's good poetry...10

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Sandra Fowler 02 January 2010

A powerful message delivered with passion and poetic skill. Well done. Warm regards, Sandra

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