Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

A Blurred Sun - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

....a blurred sun
not in the horizon
right on top at noon
...a blurred sun
man is busy making money
not groping in darkness
he has his electric shine...
for how long...and
at what cost....
he will go on...till
his energy level falls...still
he can go on with his pills is not another threat
mother nature has endured much
she is ready to embrace death

Comments about A Blurred Sun by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (1/19/2010 1:18:00 AM)

    Nature is ageing, like us human, but in more catastrophic ways. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/10/2010 9:02:00 AM)

    bluurred Sun, blurred vision, - you can't trample on anything forever without destroying even if it sustains you.

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  • Ramesh T A (1/4/2010 1:40:00 AM)

    Decision to be taken to save mankind or Earth in the World Climate Change Conference should not be like the decisions taken in World Trade Organisation! (Report) Reply

  • (1/3/2010 11:16:00 AM)

    unlike many of your other poems this one grazes the theme have succeeded here to project your message prudently and that's good poetry...10 (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2010 5:47:00 AM)

    A powerful message delivered with passion
    and poetic skill. Well done.

    Warm regards,

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  • (12/29/2009 10:35:00 AM)

    The Bible states that there is an end time (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 13, 2010

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