A Burst Of Color Poem by Ben Gieske

A Burst Of Color

Rating: 3.4

An ambrosial blue
awakens its eyes
petal by petal

blossoming into bursts
of pinkish hue
releasing an ocean

of rose petals
parachuting down
like rivulets of dreams

awashed in the dawn
of mellifluous stirrings
perspiring into a river of passion.

Robert Howard 24 June 2008

Rich and sensual like a fine Japanese water color.

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Ana-kay Rhoden 25 June 2008

I was completely blown away by the beauty in this poem.

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Seema Chowdhury 03 July 2008

into the river of passion.......... very nicely composed and good choice of words i must say.

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Kesav Easwaran 03 July 2008

imagination colourful...a poetic painting...congrats, ben

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Ershad Mazumder 04 July 2008

Its a sweet piece.Excellant painting by words.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 March 2010

Excellence and beauty woven in anice poetical tapestry - a masterpiece.

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Meggie Gultiano 16 June 2009

everything in here is beautiful, Ben..pinkish blue, ambrosial blue...i love that color.. But then i love the whole piece.Thank you for this wonderful burst of color.. take care and God bless you.. Hugs, Meggie

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Beautiful poem with nice imagery,10++

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Lillian Thomas 18 May 2009

Another very strong poem. Ben, you really have a way with words. The imagery so visual, the colors so tangible, I see the day opening like a flower. brilliant!

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 22 January 2009

that was rich and colorful with a beautiful imagery... : D

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