An ambrosial blue
awakens its eyes
petal by petal
blossoming into bursts
of pinkish hue
releasing an ocean
of rose petals
parachuting down
like rivulets of dreams
awashed in the dawn
of mellifluous stirrings
perspiring into a river of passion.
into the river of passion.......... very nicely composed and good choice of words i must say.
Excellence and beauty woven in anice poetical tapestry - a masterpiece.
everything in here is beautiful, Ben..pinkish blue, ambrosial blue...i love that color.. But then i love the whole piece.Thank you for this wonderful burst of color.. take care and God bless you.. Hugs, Meggie
Another very strong poem. Ben, you really have a way with words. The imagery so visual, the colors so tangible, I see the day opening like a flower. brilliant!
that was rich and colorful with a beautiful imagery... : D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rich and sensual like a fine Japanese water color.