A Burst Of Color Poem by Ben Gieske

A Burst Of Color

Rating: 3.4

An ambrosial blue
awakens its eyes
petal by petal

blossoming into bursts
of pinkish hue
releasing an ocean

of rose petals
parachuting down
like rivulets of dreams

awashed in the dawn
of mellifluous stirrings
perspiring into a river of passion.

Rachel Flint 24 October 2008

the grand masters have nothing on mother nature

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 02 October 2008

The colors got my attention first....then my eyes....then my ears....and then my mind...and then the whole of me.....thanks

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 29 July 2008

Ben, (submitting this again) 'Poetry is the record of the best and happiest mements of the happiest and best minds.'--Shelley I agree' This quote speaks well of you! Dorothy

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 29 July 2008

Ben, 'Poetry is the record of the best and happiest moments of the happpiest and best minds.'---Shelley I agree! That quote fits you perfectly... Dorothy

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Linda Hepner 04 July 2008

Just discovered you; what pleasure!

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 05 March 2010

Excellence and beauty woven in anice poetical tapestry - a masterpiece.

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Meggie Gultiano 16 June 2009

everything in here is beautiful, Ben..pinkish blue, ambrosial blue...i love that color.. But then i love the whole piece.Thank you for this wonderful burst of color.. take care and God bless you.. Hugs, Meggie

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

Beautiful poem with nice imagery,10++

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Lillian Thomas 18 May 2009

Another very strong poem. Ben, you really have a way with words. The imagery so visual, the colors so tangible, I see the day opening like a flower. brilliant!

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 22 January 2009

that was rich and colorful with a beautiful imagery... : D

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