A Cascading Journey Poem by ramesh rai

A Cascading Journey

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My thoughts are falling
on my stone heart, leaving a deep cavity
on my heart, like the waterfall
falling from high mountain
piercing rock of many layer
swipe all element with flow of cascade
making a stream of eagerness
to meet and submerge with a river
asking to come on her way
to meet the greater ocean, from where
my thoughts will evaporate and
reach the sky, and to drizzle with
mild water, to irrigate creation
to quench thirst of creature.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eeshah Raaziah Naqavi 23 February 2014

Lovely! Beautiful! Whilst reading it, I could smell an energetic cascade, all set for the journey toward a higher beginning to the next stop. Learning and improving :)

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Bursting with a beauty that is refreshing.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 February 2014

A thoughtful write. Beautiful lines.... my thoughts will evaporate and reach the sky, and to drizzle with mild water, to irrigate creation to quench thirst of creature. Beautiful cascading journey one followed by another to serve the purpose of journey. Loved reading this wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2014

Nice thought, nice imagery, nice poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 31 August 2014

Nice thought, nice imagery, nice poem.

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Vinny Topp 08 April 2014

Beautifully using imagery for this poetic journey. Great poem

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Roseann Shawiak 23 March 2014

Great imagery and thoughtful quenching of creative knowledge in this poem. Really enjoyed it's rhythm and flow like the cascading waterfall of your mind. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 27 February 2014

thoughts will evaporate and reach the sky They become source of creation. Beautiful.

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