A Childhood Summer Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

A Childhood Summer

Rating: 4.9


I remember those long hot Summers as if they were yesterday,
When the sun shone down on our street, the place I loved to play.
For many a window glistened, cleaned well to a sparkling shine,
Where starched white shirts blew gaily, on many a washing line.

I remember the sounds of the trains at night, as they passed on the track below,
Way down, the steep embankment, where many wild ferns would grow.
And many a door was left ajar, a life filled with Honesty and Trust,
When everyone toiled and struggled, to bring home a well earned crust.

I remember the old wheels turning, at the colliery across the way,
And I still see the old Miners faces, as they finished their shift for the day.
Their eyes still black from the coal dust, they'd make their way home from the pit,
Eager to rest their weary legs, but still full of banter and wit!

I remember the loveable character, who lived just across the street,
He'd sit outside his window, and shout from his favourite seat.
With his belly full of beer, he'd be heard on a Saturday night,
Then wake the whole street with a song and a dance! He looked such a comical sight!

I walked the lovely hillside, so often with my Dad,
And so enjoyed the tales he told, of when he was a lad.
These were the best years of our lives, in a very special way,
I'll never forget those Summers, that seem like yesterday.

Jayne Louise Davies

A Childhood Summer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Memories of my childhood in Abercynon,
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 23 December 2021

you used an apostrophe in 'Summer's' twice. Too bad it should be 'Summers'. Ha ha. You're forgiven. bri ;) I liked the poem. Thanks.

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Theo Scott 23 November 2025

I love how you are able to describe the ebbs and flows of life, how life is dualistic, harmonious to you as a little kid yet tough and difficult for the adults.I love the fact that your community had interesting people like the beer guy hahaha

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 November 2025

Many thanks Theo for your comments : )

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Isadora Quagmire 12 August 2025

So, so lovely! What a skillful and beautiful painting of your memories! ! ! This poem is so vivid and lifelike--I felt submerged in the sights and sounds of the past! Thank you for blessing us with this : )

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 November 2025

Thanks Isadora x I appreciate your comments xx

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Emma Mcullough 23 July 2025

Aww! What a sweet poem so full of memory and happiness! ! ! A truly lovely peice and a real glory! ! ! ! Thanks for brightening my day! ! ! x

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Jayne Louise Davies 28 November 2025

Thanks Emma x Much appreciated!

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Rebecca Navarre 21 September 2024

So beautifully beautifully shared! .. Love the feeling of such heart warming sentiments! .. Endless 10' S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++

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Jayne Louise Davies 29 September 2024

Many thanks Rebecca

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Rebecca Navarre 21 September 2024

Ever ever so beautifully painted! .. With such beautiful heart and soul! .. Such wonderful memories to hold and treasure through out life! ..

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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