A Cloudy Day Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Cloudy Day

Rating: 4.9


Clouds like cotton wool
On a fairly cloudy day
They adorn the sky
Until they are forcibly
Displaced by the furious winds.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan- Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The first line of the poem should be read; " Clouds like cotton wool" The system messed up the words.... I cannot edit the poem as the right word is reflected in the draft....

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Anjandev Roy 03 May 2020

Fantastic write......thanks for sharing. anjandev roy.

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Kostas Lagos 03 May 2020

You ve captured this image delightfully! 10!

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Chinedu Dike 03 May 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing, Rose.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 May 2020

An amazingly penned composition. Well crafted, dear ate Rose....10++💗💗💗

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Rob Lamberton 24 February 2023

Ahh, I've seen that happen!

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Anjandev Roy 01 May 2021

Excellent piece.....thank u....

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

Clouds like cotton wool X Displaced by the furious winds. ........... So heart touching imagery and scene

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

Here we can see the global wrestle between the peaceful weak, and the strong wicked, but in the form of poetic metaphor, there are more than one explanation of this wonderful poetry, and this is evidence of its excellency, Rose always makes big and beautiful works from daily simple things, well done and thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 May 2020

They adorn the sky Until they are forcibly Displaced by the furious winds.. cloud and the wind, the consolation until force drives it away. vry fine poem, also symbolic. tony

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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