A Cloudy Morning Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

A Cloudy Morning

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Crude green and grey
the vast expanse,
torpid
after the nocturnal torrential orgy:
raindrops—confetti after the ball,
intermittently producing
crystalline sounds
like the Chinese water torture
on the forehead:
torturing
with a delightful tranquillity
through the traffic
flopping in the puddles.
Grey clouds float
in the sky like smoke
from an extinguished fire,
but they smell fresh
with a revived life.
Suddenly,
a hooded crow croaks
through the traffic noise,
solitary as if the only bird left,
and almost indistinctively,
far in the distance
some other birds are chirping
sounding like tiny or tired birds,
or just awoken birds;
yet progressively
this morning they sound clearer
and lovelier than any other day:
like the joy of survival,
and the sun salutes us once again!

Monday, December 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,morning,rain drops,sun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 21 December 2018

Vivid picture of cloudy morning nicely captured and written. Thanks for sharing it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2018

A brilliant expression has been made on nature including rains and birds. I appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 December 2018

Like the joy of Survival! ! ! ! Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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