A Compromise I Made Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Compromise I Made

Rating: 5.0


A word widely misspelled, dictionary adds and justifies,
And over all accepted, a welcoming compromise.
An enemy of an enemy becomes an ally,
Just to win the war, it has nothing to shy.
A couple not having a good relationship still together passing the life
Just for their coming generations, a good husband and a good wife.
But a compromise on ethics has no excuse.
I condemn, and I refuse.
Yes, it was me, who wrote a poem with the title "Compromises",
Again it's me who smiles, rewrites it and boldly revises.

A compromise I made in love let me confess
The beautiful forbidden fruit it's might you can guess
Yes, I became disobedient and forgot all the ethics
Hot dynamics of life overruled the frozen statics!
Long ago in a beautiful garden I don't know who "He" is?
A naughty friend who let me knew as to who "She" is.
After knowing her I don't need to know anyone else
She now rules my heart and moves with my pulse.

Helplessly, with ethics, I made a decent compromise
Never mind, in love the ethics one may revise.

A Compromise I Made
Monday, February 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,valentine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 12 February 2018

After knowing her I don't need to know anything else She now rules my heart and moves with pulse..Beautiful lines and the decent compromise

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Indira Renganathan 15 February 2018

An excellent love poem on valentines day....superb Akhtar

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 February 2018

I have been trying to comment on this poem for a long while now, unfortunately, it was not working. Hope now, i am able to complete my comment. Akhtar Sahab, this is a forthright poem, which whether a compromise or not, brings the essence of love and life in its many shades. I like the way you have concluded it. May i quote: Helplessly, with ethics, I made a decent compromise Never mind, in love the ethics one may revise. Lovely! Top marks. Hope the button works. :)

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Khalid Saifullah 13 February 2018

Everything is fair in love and so is a compromise with ethics in love.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 February 2018

For love, everything is justified. If it is not, then just compromise. Which e'er way, its a beautiful write And reading it, was a great delight The best Valentine poem that I have read, thank you sir

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 February 2018

A poem of great substance! ....But a compromise on ethics has no excuse/I condemn, and I refuse...Thanks dear sir for sharing....10

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