A conjugal love may lack the thrills of romance,
but from dawn to dusk it's music and dance,
listen to the tune of china clay utensils,
see him, he is busy with paper and pencils,
on the dining table with a bouquet of flowers,
flowers more interested in the pencil's showers.
Daddy is starring at the back of Mom,
below the table lovely pet dear Tom,
what the hell he is doing is it painting or writing,
whatever it may be, it must be exciting.
Lo, she has brought the dishes at last.
how delicious and tasty is the hot break fast!
Daddy is washing his hands in the toilet,
now it's easy the paper we can get,
Mom! Look at it it's your nude!
You must condemn this vulgar attitude!
You are right my love, my dear sweet hearts,
I am tired of his poems, his paintings and arts,
Give it to me, let me burn it alive,
She takes it and keeps in the valley of bee hive.
A child may not understand how father and mother complement each other. Beautifully crafted poem.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.Many of your poems deserve to be on the first page of Poem Hunter.
Akhtar, such a well penned poem of the day... congrats for being chosen... big 10++++
Amidst the kitchen creational bustle there is a sense of fun and much love and warmth in your poem. Congratulations Akhtar for a well deserved poem of the day.10+
In the valley of bee hive! ! Muse! Fuse! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A conjugal love may lack the thrills of romance, May be the superficial romance is gone, but love has deepened over the years. Congrats for this good humored poem.
Beautiful lines about conjugal life...Very impressive. Daddy is starring at the back of Mom, below the table lovely pet dear Tom, what the he is doing is it painting or writing, whatever it may be, it must be exciting.
Revisiting this poem once more we feel glad. This is definitely a magnificent poem. A nice poem is chosen as the poem of the day. CONGRATULATIONS! ...10
In addition thereto, this poem also centers on the essence of poetry and the passion a poet has on his poetry works. I like the last line, it conveys the eternality of a poem. A beautifully crafted write.10 and onto my Poem List. Congratulations Akhtar. You truly deserved this accolade.
STUPENDOUS write that focuses on family and aims to strengthen the bond among family members. Breakfast is the meal that gets the day started and it is the time when family gathers and plans for the day. A happy and beautiful family has been painted on the canvas of this wonderful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A reasonable offering. We see the family together and the interrelationships. The Admin have dug into your poems of 2015. At least they are giving a Pakistani some air space. You probably know the Admin do very little on this site. Sit on their hands and let trolls in to increase revenue from advertisers. Send a message to them and you will never hear back. Try AllPoetry it is much better run by Kevin.