A Cracked Heart Poem by elena winters
A Cracked Heart
no one can see me as i blend into the crowd
call me camouflage for i am invisible
yes.........invisible to the naked eye
i cry for attention from you and only you
what else do i possibly have to do
for you to acknowledge my presence
but then i realize something
we were never meant to be
my final move to walk pass you
smell my scent that swarms around you
close your eyes, inhale me, picture me
while i gaze at you from a distance
i finally turn to walk away
my feelings for you descend
i face the fact that my heart is cracked
and my love for you has end
hits the spot.....only those who know this side of emotion can truly feel...brilliantly captured. well done.
what a beautiful way to express untold love. But wonder why? ? ? Anyway, nicely composed, natural flow has decorated the rhythm.10+++++++
So beautifully write... Have deep emotion of love... I giv it +8
Unrequited love is a common theme but you treat rather uniquely with easy verse. good write
i know the feeling, its one iv lived with forever, i hate being the outcast, who feels that love is not for u an it hurts alot, great work, has to be a 10
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 3:22:13 AM # 1.0.0
beautiful, loved it.please read some of min have only just started witing.try innocence lost and fidelity pam