Jolanta Gradowicz

A Dance - Poem by Jolanta Gradowicz

Could I ask you to dance, madam?
Let’s go to dance to this music.
You mustn’t be a lonely woman
When everything is so rhythmic.

Why do you lower your eyes?
Why do you blush and tremble?
I see disbelief on your face...
Your touch is timid and gentle.

I feel your heart beat like a bell.
You speed up though music is slow.
What happened, my dear dancer?
Is there a trouble or sorrow?

I ask you, but you keep silent.
I give a tighter hug to you.
What a dance! I love this movement.
I dream it will begin anew…

Comments about A Dance by Jolanta Gradowicz

  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/10/2008 1:55:00 PM)

    ...a fine composition indeed...........10 (Report) Reply

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  • (4/24/2008 12:02:00 PM)

    Beautifully. The reader feels a dance rhythm. Palpation of hearts also cannot remain lonely … in any way... (Report) Reply

  • (5/16/2007 12:51:00 AM)

    lovely write.. sure you can ask whomever you want to do whatever you feel..
    done well done..
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  • (10/11/2006 11:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem madam, I enjoyed it. Keep it up. Indeed you deserved 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 12, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 24, 2007

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