night is a un explained song,
when my dreams let me
venture out and cross
the darkened borders.
at night it came,
darkness in the river,
in the jungle,
in the sky
inside my body,
opening the window
of fog,
i looked at him,
who held me in my dreams.
night passed in a trance
as i opened my eyes
to see the early morning sunrise,
saying adieu,
to the vanishing moon.!
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Ma'm, this is a beautiful poem...how well you built a grandiose reception to beautiful sunrise through your wonderful thoughts...10
This poem is beautiful. Somehow it gave me the sense and feel of hope........like the hope of a bright sunny tomorrow after a dark yesterday and/or the hope of new life after a super cyclone
A beautiful write about alternation of day and night, both have blessings of their own.
truly charming and dreamy quality to the poem... celebrates the night as is befitting a happy girl.. :) lovely liked
This poem is very, very beautiful, I'm so glad I found it and I've found you. You paint such a lovely picture in my mind with your words. Thankyou Ruthie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a soothing and satisfying poem.... calm imagery, wonderful expressions. thank you.