A Deep Thought Poem by Seema Aarella

A Deep Thought

Rating: 5.0


A message of love
Was sent to earth,
From god above
Through the wind.

It touched the flowers
Every bud and bloom,
They flaunted more color
And danced with pleasure.

It reached the trees
They sprang to life,
With exquisite greens,
And fluttering leaves.

With sweetened water
The rivers flew.
Oceans surged,
And the tides grew.

In town a man,
Entangled in worries
Lived with ignorance.
And cynical theories.

Nor sunshine or sunset
Did he see?
Nor felt the wet sand
Or the cold breeze.

When this wind tried
To touch him with love,
A nasty wind he thought
And closed his door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colin Jeffery 27 September 2008

A very good poem by a very good poet

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Sarwar Chowdhury 16 September 2008

yea I liked it....well expressed............10

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Sivan P.G Menon 27 July 2008

seema.. am yet to get a feel of your...poems... shall certainly go thru few and share my views.... but certainly it has the urge from within.....complexities of present LIFE.... keep going...you have a good diction... regards.. sivan..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 27 July 2008

The poem runs not like a wind but a breeze, soothing the soul that reads. I admire you. Shanmugam

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Jeannie Ann Clark 16 January 2008

What a beautiful, beautiful poem about goodness from the Creator of heaven and earth...and then the ungratefulness felt by many...10...keep writing and thank you. I have some you will enjoy also....

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