! ...Shadows (Part 2) Poem by Seema Aarella

! ...Shadows (Part 2)

Rating: 3.5


His feelings raced to
The pinnacle of desire
Seeking an urgent intimacy
Of his corporeal requests
And her consenting femininity,
Hormones rushed,
Besieged by her thoughts
He passionately kissed
The wet Peripherals of a bloom
As he stood in the orchard
Under the passing shadows
Of Seasoned clouds…

Her constantly mounting
Desires, had her hovering
Between sleep and restiveness
Urged by his impending dream,
Clamor of her bangles,
And pounding anxious heart,
She persuasively embraces the pillow
When a rumble perturbs her
She eagerly rushes to the terrace
In her disorganized shape
Stands probing the dancing shadows
Of swaying foliage beneath…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 16 October 2008

Truely poetic piece........10+

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Aijaz Asif 16 October 2008

at last love is completed, very nicely done ma'am....thanks for sharing..another 10+

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 October 2008

sizzling....so romantic...only women can express completely feminish feelings of romantics................10

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Reshma Ramesh 16 October 2008

suddenly there is a rush of poems running on the same lines...i have a read more than half a dozen since the past two day...everyone is feeling good on ph! ...that have been said...your poem is beautiful and perfect....well done

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Rakhi Jayashankar 16 October 2008

you are very romantic may ur partner also be as romantic as u r

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Melvina Germain 30 July 2015

I would love to hear you read this delightful poem and enjoy the emotion resonated within you. Love this poem.....

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Muhammad Ali 14 February 2009

great work of art friend. i am wordless to praise. very much dominant one

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Rishi Menon 09 November 2008

unafraid, uninhibited...expressive and eloquent. the purity of your soul comes through and as with good music, good poetry needs soul which is there in this one. well done.

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Dr Kamran Haider 02 November 2008

I read this part 2, right after commenting on first part and what I hypothesized in that comment has got acknowledged by you in this one… :) Beautiful indeed… Really a work of art…

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rajagopal haran 19 October 2008

deadly punch of passion energised with love and seasoned by imagery, , , ,

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