A Destiny Unknown Poem by Aqua Flower

A Destiny Unknown

Rating: 5.0


I'm dancing in the rain
stepping in the puddles
my feet are soaking wet
the future is muddled
the wind is now blowing
my umbrella takes me flying
to a world of unknowing
Am I smiling or crying?

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Sunday, May 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,uncertainty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 12 May 2019

You are smiling for the choices are all yours. Its not every day an umbrella takes you flying. Good luck.

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Aqua Flower 17 May 2019

Lyn thank you for encouraging words and for this very nice comment! Have a wonderful day!

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Carl Roussell 12 May 2019

I like how the poem changes from the seemingly happy start to one of questioning, and when you reach your destination may you land gently.

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Aqua Flower 12 May 2019

The poem depicts the emotional rollercoaster of it all. Thank you for reading.

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