A Day Without You Poem by Aqua Flower

A Day Without You

Rating: 5.0


A day without you
is like a day without air
I wake up gasping
knowing you're not there
and my heart is aching
I think it broke in two
I don't know if I can
go another day without you

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
White Tiger 09 May 2018

I loved this poem. Thank you for sharing.

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Aqua Flower 10 May 2018

Thank you White Tiger for reading my poem and commenting! Have a nice day!

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Stephanie T Castillo 22 August 2020

I love this poem, simple and to the point for the greatest of LOVE...

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Wonderfully worded work. Loaded with a longing that is lovely and filled with love. Such a moving poem!

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Aqua Flower 25 August 2018

Thank you Howard the motivational poet Simon! Love the name you choose! Your comments keep me motivated to write more! :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2018

When a person feels the deepnes of love he or she can't live without beloved or lover. Beautifully penned.10

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Aqua Flower 25 August 2018

Thank you for your comment! Love that is like a deep river stops flowing without it's current.

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Riza Braholli 17 June 2018

a beautyful poem and with lot of elegantly. thank you Aqua!

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Chinedu Dike 31 May 2018

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Aqua Flower 31 May 2018

Having someone to love and someone to love you always makes you feel enriched! I hope to remain enriched! Thank you for your ocmment, Chinedu

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