I looked upon her beauty as a flower
I hesitated to pinch her from her stem
Instead I planted myself next to her
Where I too have flourished in a sense…..
Dedicated to my wife
2008 ©TS
This poem is short, And so beautiful. But they are no words no one could ever add to it. From the beginning to end Your love is so true to Her. Its a master piece of Her Love much respect I give you for that
That is very lovely. Short and sweet, altogether enjoyable. Stick to poems like this, the ones that have a message and a meaning.
this is a very beutiful poem that left no space for missed words or unsaid feelings.... its lll put togther in fopur lines.... realll beutiful poemmm..love it
A beautiful love poem Ted I love the idea of you planting yourself next to her.
Very cute. I get the picture of someone strolling through a meadow and being stopped by a lovely flower, not plucking it but instead sitting next to it in order to continue enjoying it.
Moving. I understood and related to this one quite well; I enjoyed its message. Your use of metaphor is flawless here.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i expected it to be longer haha lol..............i love it..........=]