A Different Tomorrow Poem by Aqua Flower

A Different Tomorrow

Rating: 5.0


I fall into this deep sorrow
looking for a different tomorrow
not a dandelion to wish upon
I long for a different song
fools get fooled easily
until truth comes in like a tsunami
memories past make dreams last
who will say the last hello
and make my dreams of a different tomorrow

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Thursday, August 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is soooo hard to let go when you are in love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 31 August 2018

The line, 'not a dandelion to wish upon', is a creative way to express having nothing to wish upon to rid the loneliness. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 10 September 2018

That is exactly the sentiments I wanted to express thank you for fully understanding the poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 August 2018

Such a marvelous write...............10+++++++++++++++++++

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Aqua Flower 31 August 2018

Thank you for reading this write and for all those plus signs too! Glad you liked reading it! Have a wonderful day!

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