A Different Tomorrow Poem by Aqua Flower

A Different Tomorrow

Rating: 5.0


I fall into this deep sorrow
looking for a different tomorrow
not a dandelion to wish upon
I long for a different song
fools get fooled easily
until truth comes in like a tsunami
memories past make dreams last
who will say the last hello
and make my dreams of a different tomorrow

copyright @ Aqua Flower

Thursday, August 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams,flower,sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is soooo hard to let go when you are in love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 31 August 2018

The line, 'not a dandelion to wish upon', is a creative way to express having nothing to wish upon to rid the loneliness. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 10 September 2018

That is exactly the sentiments I wanted to express thank you for fully understanding the poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 August 2018

Such a marvelous write...............10+++++++++++++++++++

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Aqua Flower 31 August 2018

Thank you for reading this write and for all those plus signs too! Glad you liked reading it! Have a wonderful day!

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