A Dream Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

A Dream

Rating: 3.1


If Sky is my way,
And Rainbow is my chariot,
Where Sun and Moon will be the torch of my chariot,
Clouds as the feathers of my chariot,
And Wind as the fuel of my chariot,
Now I can flight everywhere like an omnipresent;
To find out my lover,
As I dont know where she is-
and she doesn't know that I Love her.
But I'll gift her the glowing stars-
as diamonds on her crown..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayachandran Chakrapany 16 April 2012

wonderful imagination.jk

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great imagery, with nice thoughts.

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Pulakkumar Ditti 06 February 2012

Good imagination. keep it up

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Lil Lover 07 January 2012

Hey hSuch I nice poem u can right some really good poems

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 29 December 2011

A wonderful imagination Vipins. Greetings to you. Dr.V.K.Kanniappan

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 27 November 2012

Awesome! its really a poetic heart. i will also gift you the glowing stars.

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2012

Amazing lines hereby and superb poetic temperament

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Neela Nath Das 31 July 2012

So heavenly Vipins! There is the celestial light haloing your love.Stupendous.

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Ken E Hall 12 June 2012

Some lucky girl is waiting for the star bangle chariot you paint with words...glowing poem indeed...regards

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Rajendran Muthiah 01 June 2012

You roam in your chariot with glowing stars in your hand to give your love whose whereabouts you don't know. Don't worry friend. Lord Hanuman will trace her out and bring her to you. Skyhigh imagination!

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