A Drizzle Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

A Drizzle

Rating: 4.6


Skies overcast
Mighty elephants
In parade,
Incessant fireworks
Light the skies
And their sound
Dares the eardrums,
Conches and horns
And two sided drums,
Sun goes hiding
Is it night or day?

A mighty breeze
Comes from nowhere
Ushering in a drizzle
Too light to wet the earth
Elephants give way
For the shining diety.

A summer shower
that never was.

Friday, June 10, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet's Note: I have presented the overcast skies with thunder and lightning, by means of a series of metaphors related to the festivals of Hindu temples of Kerala. In the festivals, the dieties are paraded on heavily and gaudily decorated elephants. In the festival of some temples like Kootalmanikyam temple Irinjalakuda, there will be a parade of seventeen or nineteen elephants, where the diety is paraded on one elephant at the centre, and the others just accompany. Heavy bright lighting arrangements and colourful fireworks too form part of the festivals.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miss Grace 10 June 2022

The poet creates the exact image he wants to in the reader mind. The scenery is vividly described.

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Feels great that you could relate to the poem so well

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A drizzle is all you get from the enormous summer clouds…

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Rob Lamberton 26 January 2023

A little out of my element but I always enjoy a thunderstorm, even the ones without rain!

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Hi Rob, May be, this vanishing summer showers is a phenomenon unique to my place, that is, Kerala, India. Thank you for your time, and patience of course

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I had posted replies to Rebecca Navarre and Dr Nehal. But both the notes have vanished.would ph help please?

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Rebecca Navarre 11 June 2022

It sounds very beautiful! .. And filled with much awe! .. Very beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++

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I am grateful to you, Becca. May God bless you

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M. Asim Nehal 11 June 2022

Change of season well expressed.

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Though the summer clouds may not usher in heavy showers, they are the front runner for the monsoon clouds that bless us with heavy rains, sans reins

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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