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A Fantasy

Rating: 3.9
I wandered in a dream
And heard bluebells chime by the water,
Saw unicorns drink from the stream
And heard wild, whirling elvish laughter.

I realized things are not what they seem,
That little boys worship the river's daughter,
That angels grunt and butterflies scream
While good men go like lambs to the slaughter.
It was only a silly dream
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Marieta Maglas 08 September 2010
Spare, elegant lines inviting to deep meditation.
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Honest Heart 20 March 2009
a wonderful piece of work. Very nicely done!
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Pamela Lutwyche 12 October 2008
I have dreams that seem so real. Now, I wrote a story but, it is far too long so, I changed it in to a poem and put it on this site. It’s called balloon lady. Please check it out if you will and tell what you think. Oh, and if you like fantasy have a look at, I went to a ball. I like the opening. I heard bluebell chime magic.10 for you from me! ! !
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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 August 2008
...a fine composition indeed......10
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Riquetta Elliott 22 April 2008
I always have fantasy in my dreams a good one. Lovely poem.
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Frank Bana 16 January 2008
Beautiful and fluent.. and who is say, what is reality, and what is illusion? ! Many thanks John.
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Ivor Hogg 18 November 2007
This is my kind of poetry Fantasy is preferable to reality at least some of he time
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Raynette Eitel 06 May 2007
This is a gem, John...and the second stanza simply glows with literary craft and metaphors. Nice job. Keep dreaming (and share.) Raynette
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Michael Pacholski 04 May 2007
Your second verse made me think of Yeats with the witches and the rituals ('Easter: 1916' in particular) . That's a good thing. I thought the last line was a tad on the 'purple' side but otherwise this is a fine poem.
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