A Fantasy Comments

Deeply touching and poignant poem so powerfully and beautifully written The pains and grieving brought by death are brilliantly depicted..

Life passes so quickly.

The poem describes the scene of a funeral and the emotions of this new widow who has to gone through such rituals. Rituals are mandatory in every custom.This widow has to show that she mourns and thanks those who have come to attend the funeral.In the heart she may think otherwise.

This is reality of life!

But it's her only hope, the wish to move backward.~it's just hope to come back to the first everything; beautiful fantasy poem; great to read

tells them what to do next, which might mean.....birth and date is natural process. A beautiful poem is nicely executed.

Powerfully and moving brought forth. A masterful creation.

This is a great poem about the death of dear ones and their grieving family members. The emotion in the situation is truly said by the great poet and likes.

I recently lost my best friend, my companion and my wife. I am a widower who feels exactly as the widow in this poem. I must accept condolences but want to be alone with feeling my wife's memory and her presence in the home we shared together.

A very powerful poem. Emotionally touching. It is about sad occasion which is very much real.

Beautiful, moving, thank you for planting poetry in the garden of life

And if the love had ruined years before death happened

A hear touching imaginations sketching a widows emotions and thoughts

The poem echo with my heart Reminds me of the whole process of mourning. It’s so authentic Thx

Excellent

The beginning of grief . exactly

I like it. she is very real when she writes.

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this poem truly opens the closed door of mind/// brilliant words, brilliant work

The state of minds newly bereaved windows well depicted in the poem. A nice piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing.