A Girl From Nowhere Poem by David Harris

A Girl From Nowhere

Rating: 5.0


The electric blue of a lightning sky
lit up the country lane momentarily.
She walked alone
with her scarf blowing in the wind
and her clothes soaked from the light rain.
But who was she and where was she?
She did not know.
Her eyes scanned everything
looking for something she recognised.
There was nothing there and she kept walking.

A crack of thunder startled her.
She jumped and looked around.
Lights of a car lit up the hedgerows
as it raced towards her.
She moved to one side
to allow it to pass.
The driver braked abruptly
along side of her.
The passenger window
wound itself down.
The driver smiled
out from the interior of the car.

“Are you all right miss? ”
The voice was low and warm.
She felt immediately
that she could trust it.
She looked in with large innocent eyes.
“Can you help me?
I cannot remember who I am or where I am.
The passenger door swung open.
“I think you had better get in.”

Cautiously she moved towards the car.
She climbed onto the passenger seat
and closed the door.
She glanced across
at her Good Samaritan.
“Thank you.” She whispered
as the car purred and moved forwards.
“There is a Police Station
about five miles ahead.
I will take you there;
they should be able to help you.”

She looked at him
as the car raced through
the quickly darkening lane.
“Haven’t you got a handbag? ”
He asked glancing across at her.
“Handbag? What is that? ”
“Where you keep your personal possessions in.”
She looked at him with a questioning look;
it was as if he was talking a strange language.
“My name is Jim Middleton.”
He said in his low warm voice.

She looked at him again
as the hedge rows disappeared
and streetlights and buildings
began to appear.
Scattered at first,
then more and more
as they moved into the town.
He stopped outside the Police Station.
He smiled. “We are here.”
Switching off the engine, he opened the door
and walked around the car.
He opened the door
to escort her into the station.
He stood mouth opened.
She was not there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 24 October 2009

I loved this story. It's never to late to finish the others. It's the best time of year for a ghost story. Really lucid writing; and just when it seemed it was about to turn into one of those hitchhiking horror stories; it turned into a ghost tale (and those are so much nicer) .

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Sonya Florentino 27 October 2009

ooh! a ghost story...surprise ending....just in time for Halloween!

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Jean Dament 26 October 2009

I really enjoyed this great, ghost story & had wished for more. Hope you will add some more to it. Thanks for sharing your talents with us. Ravensong

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Marilyn Lott 26 October 2009

This is the type of excitement that writing brings. Breathing life into a mysterious charcter and finding out who he/she is and what brought them to this point in their life. You are a story teller, David, and I wish you well. The marketing part is very difficult and that's why I stopped writing novels and short stories. I love the art though as I can see you do. Good luck in all your artistic endevours. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Carol Gall 24 October 2009

excellent ghost story a chilling one 10

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Tai Chi Italy 24 October 2009

A chilling read David, from many perspectives...certainly worth dusting off and continuing....There girl is certainly between a rock and a hard place at the moment, being nowhere, she wouldn't be in the knights car! a thought that struck me, living a ghostly life, can be catching and take you nowhere fast. smiling at you, wishing you a good halloween muse Tai

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