A vision so bright, tongue-tied
A vision so makes legs benumbed
Unrhythmic chanting of Thy names
Won't make me move a pawn in games.
My Lord! as Thy light waves kiss
My sandy verges, I plunge in bliss.
Dazzled, blinked and stunned, I see
Then, 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in Sea.
Sweating and swaying as buds in breeze.
Moment of revelation that, then Thou
Thou art, Thou art the Creator of all.
My cells and buds and waves and all.
Thou art, Thou art, Thou art in them all.
A handful of dust this body though
Resides in and beams in, Gracious Thou.
Benumbed senses sensuous though
Fail to feel the fragrant blooms
Besides Thee, no swimming sperm, no worm- while
Ice-bergs of cares melt around, no gloom-
I am glad, I'm glad, glad like a candle plume.
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An insightful poem, inspired indeed! Depicts the awesome wonder of God.; D
Then, 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in Sea. depicts our unity with God so perfectly. This poem really takes my breath away!
wow! ! ! ! ! ! really divine........ nice rhymes....... an apt title....
Thou Thou art, Thou art the Creator of all. My cells and buds and waves and all. Thou art, Thou art, Thou art in them all. A handful of dust this body though Resides in and beams in, Gracious Thou. beautiful simply beautiful poem my dear Parmeswaram. tony
A piece of work of great value and substance! I would like to quote the last line of your poem that I liked most: I am glad, I'm glad, glad like a candle plume.....Extremely well penned dear poet! I vote this beautiful piece of work with a 10
Dazzled, blinked and stunned, I see Then 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in sea- -merging of self with the Great Creator and his creations, the blissful moment when ego vanishes -nice portrayal of the vision.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice perspective of revelations of GOD and all