Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

Silver Star - 3,451 Points (8.8.1952 / Manakad)

A Glad Vision - Poem by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

A vision so bright, tongue-tied
A vision so makes legs benumbed
Unrhythmic chanting of Thy names
Won't make me move a pawn in games.
My Lord! as Thy light waves kiss
My sandy verges, I plunge in bliss.
Dazzled, blinked and stunned, I see
Then, 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in Sea.
Sweating and swaying as buds in breeze.
Moment of revelation that, then Thou
Thou art, Thou art the Creator of all.
My cells and buds and waves and all.
Thou art, Thou art, Thou art in them all.
A handful of dust this body though
Resides in and beams in, Gracious Thou.
Benumbed senses sensuous though
Fail to feel the fragrant blooms
Besides Thee, no swimming sperm, no worm- while
Ice-bergs of cares melt around, no gloom-
I am glad, I'm glad, glad like a candle plume.

Comments about A Glad Vision by Nasarudheen.P. Parameswaran

  • Edward Kofi Louis (6/19/2016 1:09:00 AM)

    Moment of revelation! ! Nice piece of work. (Report) Reply

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  • Bharati Nayak (7/24/2015 9:17:00 AM)

    Dazzled, blinked and stunned, I see
    Then 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in sea- -merging of self with the Great Creator and his creations, the blissful moment when ego vanishes -nice portrayal of the vision.
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  • Heather Wilkins (9/20/2013 5:52:00 AM)

    a well written poem good read (Report) Reply

  • Wellington Marshall (6/27/2013 10:13:00 AM)

    Really nice poem, you're very talented.
    Thanks for sharing your work with us
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  • Valsa George (6/3/2013 6:19:00 AM)

    An exalted moment of heightened vision, a moment of fusion of our fragile self with the Infinite Self, a moment of pure bliss, of unbounded joy! ! A Great experience, poetically portrayed! ! (Report) Reply

  • (2/12/2013 1:30:00 PM)

    I like the way this poem flows. Perhaps you should put a comma after the first ''Thou art''. I forget commas too, but I think that thay are important when the poem is read...There is definately a unique vibe to this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Neetha Sasidharan (1/22/2012 4:18:00 AM)

    wow! ! ! ! ! ! really divine........
    nice rhymes.......
    an apt title....
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  • Sara Fielder (1/14/2012 12:05:00 PM)

    Then, 'I' melt into 'WE' as waves in Sea. depicts our unity with God so perfectly. This poem really takes my breath away! (Report) Reply

  • (12/30/2010 8:23:00 PM)

    benumbed senses sensuous-you have a way with words (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2010 12:05:00 PM)

    An insightful poem, inspired indeed! Depicts the awesome wonder of God.; D (Report) Reply

  • (6/17/2010 7:29:00 AM)

    Nice perspective of revelations of GOD and all (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 17, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, February 15, 2013

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