suzan gumush

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A Halo For A Ring - Poem by suzan gumush

I thought I'd bring you
A ray of sunshine
Make you all smile
And make your life worthwhile
I believe that's what we all should bring
United we should sing
To live is to breathe
And not catch any desease
Is the most gifted thing
We should all form
And not create a storm
And wear A halo
That's worth more than a diamond ring


Comments about A Halo For A Ring by suzan gumush

  • Liebling Jacobsen (10/19/2008 11:38:00 PM)

    this was a really pretty poem. just lovely. keep up the great writing (Report)Reply

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  • Miss Lavender (9/20/2008 5:45:00 PM)

    a great poem... if people know that nothing would stop good meaning except them..they would make what they think it's possible to make...thanks (Report)Reply

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  • Margaret Carruthers (9/16/2008 4:04:00 AM)

    So true, so true! ! If only we all used these actions..... (Report)Reply

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  • Dawn Slanker (8/6/2008 11:40:00 AM)

    Spiritual, poignant, and provocative. Lovely write. (Report)Reply

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  • Chitra - (8/2/2008 6:09:00 AM)

    insightful and inspiring (Report)Reply

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  • Beth L Adams (1/6/2008 3:25:00 PM)

    This is a very important spiritual message, Suzan! If we could just place God above all else, this world would be an amazing place. Well done. Have a wonderful day! Beth (Report)Reply

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  • Jim Foulk (1/19/2007 2:11:00 PM)

    nicely written, and beautiful words you used. (Report)Reply

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  • Patricia Gale (12/28/2006 6:34:00 AM)

    Beautiful advice.... (Report)Reply

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  • Nathan Strange (11/26/2006 3:15:00 PM)

    yeah i like this, its better than alot of the crap so many people keep posting (Report)Reply

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  • Careful with that dogma, my karma might hit it . (11/2/2006 6:05:00 AM)

    There are more of us than there are of them and we are right!
    Esra Sloblock
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  • Nermin Nazim (10/1/2006 5:12:00 AM)

    You are totally right my dear.
    Very well written and a good message, but are people listening nowadays?
    I hope some are!
    Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece.
    nermin
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  • Sandra Fowler (9/24/2006 5:16:00 AM)

    You have written a very touching letter to the world. Take care, Suzan.

    Kindest regards,

    Sandra
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 14, 2006


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