A Homage To D.H. Lawrence Poem by Ravi Kopra

A Homage To D.H. Lawrence

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Today I read Lawrence's poem
On breasts like Gloire de Dijon.
I saw the golden shadows
Of swung breasts swaying
Like full-blown yellow roses
On the panes of showers.
Now as I sit down to write
My daily poem, I cannot concentrate.
My lines pale against the yellow roses,
Against the glistening silver shoulders,
Against the sluicing sounds
Of rain disheveled petals.
I desire now my day white lilies
And my evening jasmine.
Someday I'll celebrate them in a poem,
But now I pay homage to Lawrence,
Wanting swung breasts swaying
Like full-blown yellow roses
Like Gloire de Dijon.

Thursday, August 3, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: love,romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Kopra 30 December 2017

Thank you Akhtar for stopping by and creating new lines. I am glad it inspired you.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 December 2017

Lines from Gloire de Dijon In the window full of sunlight Concentrates her golden shadow Fold on fold, until it glows as Mellow as the glory roses. Beautiful poem, beautiful homage. well wrote Ravi Kopra.

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Kee Thampi 16 August 2006

My lines pale against the yellow roses, Against the glistening silver shoulders, Against the sluicing sounds Of rain disheveled petals. I desire now my day white lilies I feel this is your best poem, and makes me to write

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Ravi Kopra 30 December 2017

Thank you Kee for the comment.

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