A Human Touch Poem by Vidi Writes

A Human Touch

Rating: 5.0


I am the best to you
When you are good to me.
I am the worst to you
When you are bad to me.

Worst, I just go silent into the woods
Best, I just be in blind love with you.
This is not a Love Poem by me
This is a human touch of mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Post 11 October 2009

It is nice to know that people feel like this all over the world. I must say you are very kind when you are the worst, if only you take a long walk in the woods. Best wishes

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Kesav Easwaran 11 October 2009

Human to the extremes...bright thinking...artful write Vidi...thanks...10

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Raj Nandy 14 October 2009

A meaningful poem Vidi! Our late Physics teacher use to reapeat those lines mentioned by you in the first para! -Raj

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Sandra Fowler 25 October 2009

This poem is artful in its simplicity. So very genuine. That human touch is what makes life worth living, Vidi. Warm wishes, Sandra

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Indira Renganathan 21 October 2009

This reminds me of a nursery rhyme... 'there was a little girl who had a little curl right in the middle of her forehead when she was good she was very very good but when she was bad she was horrid....your poem is a nice thoughtful adult-rhyme....thank you

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Rakesh Bedi 20 October 2009

hmmmm...moods n tempraments.....fear of unpredictable self.... and lastly; solution as self's blind love.... no good or bad, just plain, simple LOVE...vidi.to me, it is a very very beautiful n meaningful poem depicting self's understanding and finding a best possible solution, too....but, they say; it is easier said than done? ? ?

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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

nice rational lyric poem, very well written....10+++

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Mamta Agarwal 16 October 2009

Vidi you have so eloquently conveyed the ambivalece we feel towards oour loved ones. it is amazing how our feelings change according to our interactions. very meaningful write. Happy Diwali love Mamta

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