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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
Mohammad Akmal Nazir
(Bahraich, U.P. India)
*a Humble Complaint* - Poem by Mohammad Akmal Nazir
You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
As one gets relief from
Scorching heat
By gentle rain,
As the sermon of a saint soothes
The disturbed mind,
Your words could have healed
The wounds of my heart,
For once you touched me, felt me,
And covered your being with my love,
As you said,
You smelt my love and called it red rose,
What's happened now?
Thorns have grown on my lips,
My being has become the grave of your hatred,
Is it a diversion
Or you're posing to be more sensible?
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Beautiful use of words. I can relate to what is meant... thank you for sharing. (Report)Reply
Expressive and impressive composition. Thanks. (Report)Reply
A poignant and an expressive write. (Report)Reply
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Wow, wow. Love the way u have played with simple words but bringing out exactly what the heart is feeling. (Report)Reply
real life...lovely piece. (Report)Reply
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Exellent! ! :) i loved it. 10 (Report)Reply
this poem reminds me of a saying in my country where your title means the same, i love its simplicity in words.wonderful poem with wise sentences. (Report)Reply
Beautiful and amazing. Well done my friend, u have just created a masterpiece! ! ! ! (Report)Reply
criticism is always hardest to take from someone you love.
nicely written (Report)Reply
Wow, very impressive! I love the way you describe things. Lovable! I rate it a perfect 10.: -) (Report)Reply
Indeed this is a great poem.i dont even how to congratulate you
this is a kind of situation which most lovers go through.your poem
spoke to all of us who fall a victim to this situation.it not jyst a great poem but an excellent
one.THUMBS UP (Report)Reply
Excellent! The emotion is there and I can see no reason to rate this 10.
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