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Mohammad Akmal Nazir
Bahraich, U.P. India
Saturday, November 27, 2010

*a Humble Complaint*

Rating: 4.4
You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
As one gets relief from
Scorching heat
By gentle rain,
As the sermon of a saint soothes
The disturbed mind,
Your words could have healed
The wounds of my heart,
For once you touched me, felt me,
And covered your being with my love,
As you said,
You smelt my love and called it red rose,
What's happened now?
Thorns have grown on my lips,
My being has become the grave of your hatred,
Is it a diversion
Or you're posing to be more sensible?
Mohammad Akmal Nazir
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hello 10 October 2018
it is so good but it is so bad
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REZA HUNTER LION 29 September 2018
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Ishan Dwivedi 15 July 2018
Poem with a great stuff
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Rommel Galicia 22 June 2017
very nice poem indeed??
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Khanyisile Mtshali 21 November 2016
Beautiful use of words. I can relate to what is meant... thank you for sharing.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2016
Expressive and impressive composition. Thanks.
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Seema Chowdhury 17 September 2015
A poignant and an expressive write.
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Precia Liz 27 December 2014
nice poem, i liked it...
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Akhtar Jawad 26 June 2014
Nice idea, nice poem.
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Wow, wow. Love the way u have played with simple words but bringing out exactly what the heart is feeling.
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