Once upon a time, dear
This day, every year
Made me bathe in tear-
As it came so near.
At a pretty little past
Although it'd be the last,
For things fade so fast
't was day of my heart.
On this day you came
To my Earth like flame,
Gave my love a name
And my mind, a frame.
The way I felt the Sun,
The way I spent the days,
The way I looked the sky
The way I touched the waves,
Everything what was there,
Never looked so fine,
All they started to shine
As if with your sign.
To be continued....
good poetic thoughts need to be streamlined ur the most up coming poet on PH KNOW IT
I adore such lovely sentiments in the poem.a very sweet lovely poem from you..reminds me of my early teen days. 10 out of ten Sir.
THIS POEM REMEMBERED MY CHILDHOOD MEMORIES IN THE SPRING. THANK YOU SIR.
A lovely poem... Birthday wishes..... Thanx for sharing sir.... Naila
Poetic thoughts have been reflected touchingly in this poem. I quote...... On this day you came To my Earth like flame, Gave my love a name And my mind, a frame. A beautiful poem on love, birthday and melancholy has been presented astutely.10
Melancholic but well composed, thanks for sharing the poem with us
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A poignant poem of love so beautifully crafted. Each line of this poem is embedded with passion and marvelous thoughts. The flow, construction and rhyme are just fantastic. Can't wait to read the continuation of this great piece of work.10