simply a query by the desire divine
as the night hides from the day by the darkness
legacy when transferred by the gleams of love
the clone yet fledges by the blooms again
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'clouds seem to whisper the speckles of rain' was my favourite line, but there were many other magnificent ones. Thanks.
what adorable and magnificient work, i would say its belong to be on the top list of one of the best poems. well penned
You have been blessed with a gift.........and I thank you for sharing it first with my eyes then my mind and now my soul.........Thank you Dr. Subhendu kar
this poem reminds me the beauty of mary wismer`s poems, so beautiful, thanks for sharing.
Hi subhendu, 'earth yet transpires by the sorrow smiles when tumble by the soul...' It is sad poems, but you give much beautiful feeling to readers... Tsira
Extremely beautiful, well written and enjoyable. Thise is one of the better poems i've written on here. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.
Your throw words like confetti upon the page and they land with grace and abandonment. Your love blossoms in all seasons and your pen relishes the music of the language you employ with such devotion. Beautiful tender-hearted verse. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
love eternal simply reappears by the blue trust when truth and time is the belief Thoughtful, deep, philosophical and yet mellifluous language so much is precipitated while reading these lines….
The legacy of love, eternal, an always reappearing fact of life! *10*! ! Best regards! ! Friend Thad
Stellar work, Doctor....Resplendent imagery, and even-flow structure, keystone this pen-gem.... ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
‘…earth yet transpires by the sorrow/smiles when tumble by the soul/yet the novels of night as tucked away /tryst when leads the vanquished by the legacy of love ‘ A melancholy mellow…rich with vivid biblio metaphor… Like eye-ear-candy …in this world of sorrows still…and sorrow become magnanimous… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK