Thursday, April 3, 2008

A Legacy Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

simply a query by the desire divine
as the night hides from the day by the darkness
legacy when transferred by the gleams of love
the clone yet fledges by the blooms again
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Dr subhendu kar
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 April 2010

‘…earth yet transpires by the sorrow/smiles when tumble by the soul/yet the novels of night as tucked away /tryst when leads the vanquished by the legacy of love ‘ A melancholy mellow…rich with vivid biblio metaphor… Like eye-ear-candy …in this world of sorrows still…and sorrow become magnanimous… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Rachel Butler 11 October 2009

events yet croon by the history Rachel Ann Butler

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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008

The poem has magical and inspiring imagery. A beautiful poem!

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Andrew Blakemore 20 April 2008

Beautiful syntax and lovely words. Excellent verse. Andrew

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Rani Turton 17 April 2008

'clouds seem to whisper the speckles of rain' was my favourite line, but there were many other magnificent ones. Thanks.

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Patrice James 17 April 2008

what adorable and magnificient work, i would say its belong to be on the top list of one of the best poems. well penned

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Lorraine Bennike 16 April 2008

You have been blessed with a gift.........and I thank you for sharing it first with my eyes then my mind and now my soul.........Thank you Dr. Subhendu kar

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 14 April 2008

this poem reminds me the beauty of mary wismer`s poems, so beautiful, thanks for sharing.

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Tsira Goge 14 April 2008

Hi subhendu, 'earth yet transpires by the sorrow smiles when tumble by the soul...' It is sad poems, but you give much beautiful feeling to readers... Tsira

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David Desantis 07 April 2008

Extremely beautiful, well written and enjoyable. Thise is one of the better poems i've written on here. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

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Alison Cassidy 04 April 2008

Your throw words like confetti upon the page and they land with grace and abandonment. Your love blossoms in all seasons and your pen relishes the music of the language you employ with such devotion. Beautiful tender-hearted verse. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Abha Sharma 03 April 2008

love eternal simply reappears by the blue trust when truth and time is the belief Thoughtful, deep, philosophical and yet mellifluous language so much is precipitated while reading these lines….

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Thad Wilk 03 April 2008

The legacy of love, eternal, an always reappearing fact of life! *10*! ! Best regards! ! Friend Thad

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Stellar work, Doctor....Resplendent imagery, and even-flow structure, keystone this pen-gem.... ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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