Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,539 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

A Legacy Of Love - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

simply a query by the desire divine
as the night hides from the day by the darkness
legacy when transferred by the gleams of love
the clone yet fledges by the blooms again

yet I know when unknowable
the light as when mystical glow
by the warmth of legacy as juxtaposed
even besotted by the quivering jolt

love eternal simply reappears by the blue
trust when truth and time is the belief
the love yet incarnated by the semblance
jingles may reason true moment when glimmers

resonance seems to be slow when disinterred
never being befuddled by the grace when guiled
tears may pierce the heart by the blood
cry when shatters the strength when jitters

light yet pattered by the rays when glued
the blue never be jilted from the moon
warmth still exists by the sun even in hide
the deep night when reposed somewhere

events yet croon by the history
leading the knackered to the glimpse
autumn when shadowed passion still respires
clouds seem to whisper the speckles of rain

earth yet transpires by the sorrow
smiles when tumble by the soul
yet the novels of night as tucked away
tryst when leads the vanquished by the legacy of love


Comments about A Legacy Of Love by Dr subhendu kar

  • (4/6/2010 3:40:00 PM)


    ‘…earth yet transpires by the sorrow/smiles when tumble by the soul/yet the novels of night as tucked away /tryst when leads the vanquished by the legacy of love ‘

    A melancholy mellow…rich with vivid biblio metaphor…

    Like eye-ear-candy …in this world of sorrows still…and sorrow become magnanimous…

    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (10/11/2009 5:06:00 AM)


    events yet croon by the history

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • (5/18/2008 7:54:00 AM)


    The poem has magical and inspiring imagery. A beautiful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Andrew Blakemore (4/20/2008 2:05:00 AM)


    Beautiful syntax and lovely words. Excellent verse. Andrew (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2008 12:41:00 PM)


    'clouds seem to whisper the speckles of rain' was my favourite line, but there were many other magnificent ones. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2008 6:21:00 AM)


    what adorable and magnificient work, i would say its belong to be on the top list of one of the best poems. well penned (Report) Reply

  • (4/16/2008 11:31:00 AM)


    You have been blessed with a gift.........and I thank you for sharing it first with my eyes then my mind and now my soul.........Thank you Dr. Subhendu kar (Report) Reply

  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (4/14/2008 11:30:00 PM)


    this poem reminds me the beauty of mary wismer`s poems, so beautiful, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (4/14/2008 3:29:00 PM)


    Hi subhendu, 'earth yet transpires by the sorrow
    smiles when tumble by the soul...' It is sad poems, but you give much beautiful feeling to readers... Tsira
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  • (4/7/2008 2:40:00 PM)


    Extremely beautiful, well written and enjoyable. Thise is one of the better poems i've written on here. I really enjoyed it, thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2008 2:36:00 AM)


    Your throw words like confetti upon the page and they land with grace and abandonment. Your love blossoms in all seasons and your pen relishes the music of the language you employ with such devotion. Beautiful tender-hearted verse. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2008 9:38:00 PM)


    love eternal simply reappears by the blue
    trust when truth and time is the belief

    Thoughtful, deep, philosophical and yet mellifluous language

    so much is precipitated while reading these lines….
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  • (4/3/2008 9:16:00 PM)


    The legacy of love, eternal, an always reappearing fact of life! *10*! !
    Best regards! ! Friend Thad
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/3/2008 6:44:00 PM)


    Stellar work, Doctor....Resplendent imagery, and even-flow structure, keystone this
    pen-gem....

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 3, 2008


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