most woman to day are highly liberated lot,
they no longer care to, wake up early and
greet their hubbies with a cup of coffee, but
expect hubbies to take lead in coffee et all.
they have abandoned the traditional sari, that is
a marvel in design, concept, etiquette, comfort
that goes to show case them, beautiful and
elegant what ever be their real form, color, height,
weight et all and many formulations in wear.
jeans they wear are tight at the precious site,
and showcase their butt to the actual contour,
is a marvel, as to how they make jeans to such
perfection in size and seating, like Shakespeare
had said “a chair that fits buttocks of all sizes”.
such tight fitting at precious frontal site lead
to trouble in urinary tract, and may lead to
kidney, besides affects fertility in woman, .
it is amazing ladies in western countries wear,
half skirt, sleeveless blouse in freezing cold
while their men wear full suite, tie and boots,
that protects them from detrimental cold.
such exposure to earn a coveted quote on
their, “sexuality” does last few seconds, while
those, in traditional saris stay excited for the
men when exposed up to their heels, while
exposed up to their knee, they go crazy,
wild and delirious, . for any thing covered
causes excitement and while those
exposed bare, declines in excitement
as in “proximity leads to contempt”.
beauty does not lie in exposure of vitals
and chemicals, but in healthy body, mind,
compassion, love for family, elders, kids
and, colleagues, that reflects in them
as 'inner beauty', an instant hit with men.
the bridal make that woman plan days
together, with lakhs spend, does not last
even a day as the groom seeks to remove
it, earliest when the mighty sun calls it a day.
physical attraction too does not last a day,
as the the real test lies in their mutual
understanding that depends on the “zing thing”
in woman, exclusive in them, like finger
prints that are dissimilar in any two.
woman today are still lucky, as men despite
their dominance in life and work, when back
home and after a shower and dinner, attention
to kids seeks them out like a lazy pet, and falls
back on their impressive bust, for love and
comfort for the rest of the night with them.
if woman still want a highly liberated life, men
might go astray, with home shifted often, children
delivered and abandoned at locations, like in wild
affected by vagaries of nature and deprived of love.
does any woman wants this to happen to them? ! .
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There are some important things that you say in this poem but unfortunately they get lost in the mellow tirade against modernism and modern-day women. You are trying to uphold traditional customs and values but then you have to look it at without any bias... better right an essay on this topic than this..
Hi, this is a poem supposed to be read by the women of today or the young females now, but to women my age, it is useless, for we know the trend now. Thanks for your insight which is very useful to women of today! Let them visualize the ugly side of their being too liberal I rate you 8.!
Nice on poetic description, yet we shall not judge any one, every body who does any thing have some context to it
Nice work with the muse of things seen around us today. Yes! The dressing code.
Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. I concur with the poet's perspective on the desirability of the traditional role of woman against the so called role of liberated women. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Your very explosive poem is an eyeopener to such 'liberated' women who can guess the consequences of their actions..............thanks for sharing, mandara
a rhetorical question for the title. A very nice work on the essay of the modern woman.thanks for sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
you confuse liberation with being fashion obsessed...or maybe you re saying the women of today consider being foolishly fashionable as liberation. Me, i really love the sari and wait for the day when i ll grow up so i can wear it, u see im just 15 :) nice poem it kinda engrossed me, i like the way u give it a funny touch.