David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

A Little Blue - Poem by David Darbyshire

Got a stone in my shoe,
wondering what I should do?
Also have a splinter in my finger,
feeling a little blue.

Got something in my eye,
but I am not going to cry.
Gonna go see the doc,
to get rid of that rock.

Comments about A Little Blue by David Darbyshire

  • Dawn Fuzan (5/14/2014 3:43:00 AM)

    Mr darbyshire Amazing poetic style here, well done (Report) Reply

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  • Melvina Germain (2/16/2007 12:35:00 AM)

    Ahh David, that's really sweet, love it---Melvina--- (Report) Reply

  • (9/24/2006 7:56:00 PM)

    I could listen to you all day... You are a lot of fun!

    You are the coolest... take care, k
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  • (9/24/2006 2:52:00 PM)

    Great one this, roll out the barrel of fun, Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2006 10:35:00 AM)

    dave...3 miseries...no wonder you are feeling blue...now you have filled my heart with rocks...big ones...lol...love...nalini (Report) Reply

  • Ernestine Northover (9/14/2006 6:41:00 AM)

    I think you might put your foot in it somehow when the Doc sees you. Still it's a start I suppose. Ha!
    Funny clever write. Enjoyed it.
    Love Ernestine XXX
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  • (9/14/2006 3:29:00 AM)

    Know the feeling, which you understate, in semi-detached manner, D; this is effective. (But we don't want you to feel blue....) t x (Report) Reply

  • (9/14/2006 3:21:00 AM)

    Dave, there's a bunch of session guys who go under the name, 'Little Blue'. Give them a listen, and they'll cheer you up.
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 14, 2006

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 15, 2010

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