poet Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

A Little Happiness

Baby now-a-days you make me so depress
I want to borrow a little happiness!

It’s very hard to make you passionate
It seems I don’t know how to change my fate!

Now I think you are not my cup of tea
You are like a lost treasure in deep sea!

As if I am in love with the Satan
Who doesn’t know how to love a human!

Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 9, 2011
Poem Edited: Monday, October 10, 2011

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  • Akanksha BhattAkanksha Bhatt (10/13/2012 7:47:00 AM)

    very beautiful poem! really very nicely written! thanks for sharing!

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  • George Bernard HoughGeorge Bernard Hough (11/26/2011 6:58:00 PM)

    Another heartfelt poem fitting between the previous two I read, I may have been tempted to say ' Who doesn`t know how to love a man' but who am I to comment, another enjoyable look into life.

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  • Wang Qian (10/15/2011 6:09:00 AM)

    Really a wonderful one! Especially the last two lines, feel the power of your poem ~

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  • Jinal OswalJinal Oswal (10/13/2011 5:32:00 AM)

    The last two lines are awesome, well concluded :)

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  • David Ration Lekoba (10/10/2011 5:19:00 AM)

    Certainly your last verse dresses up the language of your poem. it creates the deep sense of feeling that has been dettached between the two lovers in the poem. it's a deep expression of love possible lost>>>> if the poet compairs his love to satan who knows no love! ! ! wow...beautiful

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  • Kamel kamel (10/10/2011 4:16:00 AM)

    As if I am in love with the Satan
    Who doesn’t know how to love a human
    a strong expression
    nice poem

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