It takes so long to get there
Like madness to be too late...
Fragile, fragile onset,
Captured in the avenue of delay...
Like a paper-cut-by surprise
You make a break and then you bleed
And then you find a band-aid
And wrap it tightly to your wound...
Dare there be a reason
To withdraw one resolution
You can't-the pain is always there
Remaining with no solution...
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Great Bengali Poet Rabindranath Tagore [Indian … a Noble laureate] wrote ‘Joy in love solely short lasing Jilt in love is wholly everlasting.’ Nice poem…metaphor equally good. Thanks for such a touching poem 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK
Love knows no bounds when it wants to leave at the cost of pain you write the tale so well indeed Romeo...thanks...regards
Love will be our timeless joy and pain. The poet is telling the truth about how love and emotion will be never parted from pain and hope. Excellent poem about love.
Excellent use of metaphor. I really liked the poem for its oustanding theme. Rich in imagery and style. Wonderful stuff.
In reality it is Like standing on two elements Wet soil and river! ...... nice poem sir, fortunates may be those who doen't expose trust they repose nothing to suppose welcome to pain that is only gain love is to be supreme it has no expremes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
very nice ans sad lyric poem...maybe she didn't make the break... 10/10