A Love's Game Poem by Romeo Della Valle
A Love's Game
Once you were the moon
And I was the sun,
I was a gardener
And you a beautiful rose...
You were the diamond
And I was the ring...
Two bodies, one soul
Great moments we shared
And I still recall...
The time we spent together
Was not a waste of time at all...
For one reason or another,
Love became a game,
Strategies were not exchanged
Since it was just your game
You tried to drive me insane
But little did you know
Things drastically have changed
For, I am far from being the same...
Now, we are heading some where
But not on the same lane...
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Great job and thanks for commenting on my poem this was a really good poem
Lovin the rhyme scheme. Made an average story more than acceptable.8/10.
A well penned write, it's beautifally readable...and caputures the blend of reality. Nicely done.10/10
Hi Romeo A nice work and readable..and strenuous..too. well done..10
Once you were the moon And I was the sun, I was a gardener And you a beautiful rose... You were the diamond And I was the ring... Two bodies, one soul The start seems right I thought you did find the One! ..for..true love..I thnk I need not to expect but give!
Warm, captivating and completely writing.Many memorable lines in this one. Poetry is certainly in your blood. Thank you for sharing.Mari.
Great poem - touch of sadness in an otherwise sweet poem. Reality can ruin fantasy. Close to my heart right now. Thanks for sharing
i find it so close to hearts great work mister romio keep it up 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/4/2025 11:45:11 PM # 1.0.0
A fine poem.. fun reading