A Lovely Dream, A Secret Wish Poem by Jinal Oswal

A Lovely Dream, A Secret Wish

I dream of an ocean
Dolphins enjoying themselves
Sharks out for hunt
All the penguins in front.

I dream of grasslands
The cows feasting on the grass
A rainbow overhead
The flowers colored in red.

I dream of a forest
The birds chirping all around in the woods
A chilling wind and the dancing leaves
All the animals trying to seize.

Enjoying my dream
I am loving all these themes
Suddenly I rise from my dream,
I don’t want to dream of you anymore
As I want you for real(Amen)

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Unwritten Soul 18 November 2011

Beautiful and feel so much innocence running in my smile while reading this poem..It really nice and got wonderful flavor..so free and true! ! -Unwritten Soul

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 24 November 2011

beautiful poem Jinal, , , it makes me think how we take nature for granted, many of don't care about it.a very good write my friend...

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The 4am Poet Worm 23 May 2012

Hmm a prayer perhaps.... a beautifull desription of all things great and small

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The 4am Poet Worm 23 May 2012

Hmmm a Prayer perhaps? ..... Thankful for life..for love.. and the imagination to describe all creatures great and small....

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Prabal Dahal 02 December 2011

WOW! ! great! You have meticulously described different parts of mother earth and expressed your own feelings at the same time. COOL!

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Sajna Kailas 29 November 2011

yes Amen! ! nature's esteem ethnicity! God's wonderful creation! while reading this i remember my homestate Kerala is otherwise known as God's own country! nice creation loved it!

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Jacqui Broad 24 November 2011

Yes, of the love of nature we can always be sure of. Dreaming about the person we fancy, brings forth many uncertainties. Sometimes dreams are better than reality. Beautiful poem...

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