Farah Anasmosa

Rookie - 126 Points (Malaysia)

A Memories Passer - Poem by Farah Anasmosa

Once the memories created
It will never fade away
Whether it is precious
Or as bitter as death

Once the memories created
The feels you've felt won't go
It lives along with the future
It stays forever

Once the memories created
You will never know
When it will come to an end
And you will never want to let go

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Blues Poem


Comments about A Memories Passer by Farah Anasmosa

  • Khairul Ahsan (12/21/2015 11:48:00 AM)


    Well conceived, well articulated poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/19/2015 9:11:00 AM)


    touched with your writing: ') (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (12/14/2015 9:28:00 AM)


    Lovely written poem. Deep thought on memories that will not fade.
    Surely the memories of our most emotional moments are carved in our minds as if they were carved in stone. However the bitterness of some of these memories does fade with time and reasoning. If the memory of a person we lost, the extremely bitter feeling of having lost, is often with time replaced by a loving feeling of gratefulness for having had, even though the feeling of missing the person is never completely gone. Really thought provoking poem. Well done
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/17/2015 10:50:00 AM)


    Nicely conceived and written. Thanks, Farah (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/17/2015 7:35:00 AM)


    'Once the memories created
    You will never know
    When it will come to an end
    And you will never want to let go'

    Yes, memories are very difficult to let go, but eventually, they lose the same flair of impacting us the way they did us in the past...

    A very nice poem Farah.. Thanks for sharing..
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  • Fabrizio Frosini (11/17/2015 5:39:00 AM)


    unfortunately, also the strongest and most 'precious' memories can fade away.. but till they are there (with us, rooted deep in our mind) , they can give us warmth and help us going on..
    Thanks for sharing, Farah, and.. welcome at PH!
    Cheers
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/17/2015 5:33:00 AM)


    Beautifully done. Flowing smooth and simple. Keep inking. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (11/17/2015 5:26:00 AM)


    The poem itself is creative of a memory, the reader can't forget this lovely poem........................10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2015 5:22:00 AM)


    Memories, good or bad, once created in an individual's mind, do linger there for a short or long span depending on the intensity of the instance/ object of memory. However, since time is the healer of all wounds it acts as a catalyst helping one's memories to gradually fade away. In addition, forgetfulness is the boon bestowed on human beings that helps in this stupendous task.
    Well crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.9 points.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Poem Edited: Monday, December 14, 2015


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