A Mere Man Poem by louis rams
A Mere Man
i am nothing but a mere man, with mere thoughts
but with a love and song so deep in my heart
that it touches every part, every part of my total being.
this is what my friends and family are seeing.
i look at you, and every feature of you face
stays in my mind.
the sparkle in your eyes, the tenderness of your lips
your soft brown hair, and cute little nose
shows the beauty of a perfect pose.
i am but a mere man, and you as my companion
we'll walk hand in hand.
absorbing all of the LORDS wonders.
the blue skies, the stars at night
the clouds, the grass, the trees
and the tiny honeybees.
the oceans, rivers, and the streams
all of which can be seen.
billions of wonders on this earth
the most important one is-'giving birth'.
it does not matter if it's human
animal, plant or fowl,
its beauty is world reknown.
a mere man am i
but the LORDS beauties will never die.
i agree with linda your poems always has the touch of the soul...not just a mere man...giving birth definitely is a wonder....beautifully wriitten...10
si no big brother of mine is an ordinary man.. caz i ain't.. hehe. nicely written piece.
A humble man who definitly looks from the inside out with a positive outlook on life. Far from mere 10++
Yea a mere man but with spiritual leaning................a good write...........
very interesting and meaningful.reminds of a famous poem. voted10 surya
look at you, and every feature of you face stays in my mind. the sparkle in your eyes, the tenderness of your lips your soft brown hair, and cute little nose shows the beauty of a perfect pose. here u are just before me with complet perfection in my eyes... what an lovely write dear ramji... i liked it most... read mine mary to marry, butterflies around and no separate ways...
The devotion that breathes through this wonderful piece..is outstanding....you have a natural talent dear poet.......lovely written louis 10+++
This one comes straight from the soul where all true poetry has its genesis.10, for you. Warm regards, Sandra
a devotional poem....done with conviction...heart and soul very nice cheers
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No Louis, you are more than a Mere man! For all that you feel is that of the Love God has given to you. That then removes the merness of any man. Ten on this one Louis! God Bless, Linda