Ramesh T A

Gold Star - 51,908 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

A Modern Paradise! - Poem by Ramesh T A

Rotating sprinkler spraying water over green lawns,
Colourful flowers fully bloomed dancing by breeze,
The buildings standing in sophisticated models, I feel
As if I am stranded in paradise with none besides me!

A calm atmosphere prevails there except the sound of
Humming birds and bees hovering over flowers to get
Honey and enjoy varieties of feast leaving me as witness
Just like them among the dancing flowers under sunshine!

This is modern paradise one has to be ever living, I feel,
When I am coming out of a modern hospital office and
Planning to go to town by available vehicle outside.....
After seeing the new born child fresh as new little flower!

Sans natural surrounding, it will be a concrete jungle
To stay inside modern buildings fully closed for AC...!

Topic(s) of this poem: nature


Comments about A Modern Paradise! by Ramesh T A

  • Jaishree Nair (8/29/2015 4:12:00 AM)


    We can only enjoy artificially created Paradise. Thought well penned .thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/29/2015 12:47:00 AM)


    Wonderful imagery. So nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Ramesh T A Ramesh T A (8/29/2015 3:22:00 AM)

    Thanks for you nice appreciation of the poem, my friend!

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/28/2015 11:56:00 PM)


    Very well written, i liked it.............10
    If you find time please review my poems. Thanks.
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    Ramesh T A Ramesh T A (8/29/2015 3:23:00 AM)

    Thank you for your good comment and I do what you say when I get time!

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 28, 2015



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