A Moments Bliss Poem by Bonnie Collins

A Moments Bliss

Rating: 3.8


As I walked passed you today
as we accidentaly ran into one
another, made a feeling inside
of me, feel like time had stood still

After alll this time, I still can feel the
twinkle in your eye gazing into mine
That magnificantly traveled into the
walls of my heart

Time waltzed in and took so much
from us, but gave it back when two
hearts engaged in a moments bliss...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 17 February 2009

The eyes really do tell the story! Please read 'A Saint Valentine....Moment.'

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Irene Clark-hogg 16 February 2009

Lovely! I enjoyed your poem. Irene

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Vaibhav Pandey 14 February 2009

very soothing piece....you write with great simplicity...I love your style

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I have been there. I have felt this chill.. this piece rung truth

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Scarlet Romantika 13 February 2009

Very pretty piece a true romantic treasure. Beautiful.

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time waltzed in, brilliant

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Laurie Hill 18 April 2009

What a lovely touching poem of something never quite lost......10+

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 March 2009

A blissful collision. A beautiful poem, Bonnie......10. Regards Naseer

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James Nall 18 February 2009

excellent, bonnie.to the heart

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 17 February 2009

Good morning Bonnie and I enjoyed this true love poem and it reminded me of Hank Williams Sr. song 'I Can't Help It But I'm Still In Love With You' A good read, I enjoyed. LOyd PS Thank you for all of your reviews of my work previously as well. LOyd

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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