A Natural Smile Poem by Hemakumar Nanayakkara

A Natural Smile

Rating: 5.0


Birds twittering sweet melodies in the morning
Fragrance of a rain spreading in the gentle breeze
Rustling leaves in a forest of trees
Leash of foxes running free to the wild
Smooth silky clouds sailing across the sky
Appearence of rainbows above the far horizon
Herd of cows grazing in the meadow
Grass glittering with early morning dew
Gardens full of colourful blooming flowers
Butterflies floating around fragrant blossoms
Through the eyes one could see the beauty of mother nature
Yet, would not be able to experience any kind of a sensation
That could be as beautiful as a pure natural smile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 09 August 2008

A celebration of nature and, at the end of your poem, the warmth of a human smile. Beautiful write, my poet friend. Ten from me. As always, Sandra

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Lauren Watkins 09 August 2008

Wonderful write, especially as natural smiles seem to be endangered species these days.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 August 2008

this poem yours on natue is a poetic natural smile...well done HN... votes ten

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Vilma Xelin 08 August 2008

Very fresh your poem! I could feel the air around me while i read it! I just love it! thanks for sharing!

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Wendy Bureau 07 August 2008

Oh Bravo Poet.. such a vivid picture you have written..thank you for taking me off on a stroll with Mother Nature.. *smiles*

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Kathleen West 07 October 2008

Your poem brought a smile to my face with purity of it...Best regards, Kathleen

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Thad Wilk 17 August 2008

Nature has wondrous beauty and it has been here a while But it can't beat or compete with the sensation of - A natural smile! ! *10*! ! A splendid read Hemakumar! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Linda Moore 11 August 2008

Every line made me smile at the thought of them. Smiles something you can give away and are most often returned to you. A real feel good poem Linda

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Evelyn de Lara 11 August 2008

That was beautiful. I was able to picture everything. Very well written.

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Viola Grey 10 August 2008

beautifully painted right down to the last line...great work

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