Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Rookie (Colombo / Sri Lanka)

Beginning Of Spring - Poem by Hemakumar Nanayakkara

Eternal sunshine brightly
rises over the east
Rays of daylight slowly
embrace cold decaying mist
Days eventually become
longer, warmer and brighter
Mournful winter quietly
disapears soon thereafter

Sunlight passionately touches
the humid grounds
Dew drops elegantly glisten
like precious diamonds
Songbirds chirp sweet
melodious morning tunes
Snowdrops dangle dancing
in gentle breezes

Daffodils germinate
penetrating roots enter deep
Huge, naked trees calmly wakeup
after a long winter sleep
Rushes on twigs appear with
young shoots and leaves
Beginning of spring is
the auspicious birth of new lives...



Copyright(c) Hemakumar Nanayakkara


Comments about Beginning Of Spring by Hemakumar Nanayakkara

  • Barry A. Lanier (8/13/2008 4:12:00 PM)


    Beautiful metaphors flowing with precision and feeling connecting nature with the human persona (Report) Reply

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  • (8/11/2008 12:36:00 AM)


    Its little things like this that make life worth while but at the same time are to easily neglected or forgotten. Thank you for reminding me how lovely life can be. Your words really do capture the moment perfectly (Report) Reply

  • (8/4/2008 5:42:00 PM)


    Beautiful images you create with this poem. Melodious and refreshing. A lovely write. (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2008 1:42:00 PM)


    Hemakumar,

    This is stunning....such a perfect scene for your reader to sit in to read these wonderful words..........lovely penned piece of writing '10'


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    Jon
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  • Simone Inez Harriman (5/31/2008 12:25:00 PM)


    A lovely poem to brighten the spirits. Thank you Hemakumar for the spring vision. (Report) Reply

  • (5/18/2008 7:46:00 AM)


    Picturesque and lovely, and inspiring! (Report) Reply

  • Charles M Moore (4/28/2008 8:05:00 PM)


    The patience of nature knows only the spring, Enjoyed the read, Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2008 8:40:00 AM)


    You so aptly describe the coming of Spring. Your words put a joyous breath into living things. Great poem...I enjoyed it very much. (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2008 3:34:00 AM)


    Here in Yorkshire, England, the fields are leaping with lambs. I have a feeling you would enjoy seeing them... You have a strong feeling for life, Hemakumar. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (4/27/2008 3:30:00 AM)


    Spring is my favouritge season, the start of life, a burst of joy. Lovely poem. Seasons change but this was written by that which never changes. Bob (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2008 8:50:00 AM)


    change in season, spring always pleasing. A good write..... (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2008 8:46:00 AM)


    So vivid and peaceful, I could feel myself there, A true pleasure to read, Also a 10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2008 3:41:00 PM)


    A very heartwarming and mesmerizing write Hemakumar! beautiful read indeed! ! *10*! !
    Best regards! Friend Thad
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  • Linda Ori (4/22/2008 3:01:00 PM)


    'melodious morning tunes' - great phrase with wonderful flow. A beautifully descriptive poem with great detail to spring's wondrous glories. A lovely spring scene painted upon the page. Great job!
    Linda :)
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  • (4/21/2008 10:52:00 PM)


    very beautiful words to describe such a wonderful and beautiful season your descriptive words were warming and talently chosen and written with heart and soul, , blessings..cecil (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2008 2:38:00 PM)


    Of course this entire poem is beautiful, but i really found myself drawn in by the first few lines

    'Eternal sunshine brightly
    rises over the east
    Rays of daylight slowly
    embrace cold decaying mist'

    i wish i had thought of that!
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  • Melvina Germain (4/21/2008 12:50:00 AM)


    This is precious Hemaumar, an exquisite description of the beginning of spring.
    Melvina
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  • Ernestine Northover (4/19/2008 5:06:00 PM)


    This is a lovely write Hemakumar, a delight to read, with wonderful imagery.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
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  • (4/19/2008 2:51:00 PM)


    It's really the spring of life and I see a poet-painter in this valuable poem Hema!
    Good luck to you my dear and many thanks indeed for your lovely comment on my poem.
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  • Craig Anderson (4/19/2008 8:30:00 AM)


    A beautiful description of re-awakening life. Stunningly descriptive a worthy 10 in my humble opinion. Regards Craig. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 25, 2010


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