i love the river between the banks
beshrew a drinker who doesn't give thanks
i love the breeze hitting my face
it's from my God, a very huge grace
i love the culver flying free
holding a branch of an olive tree
i love the sun of a shiny day
throwing on my flower a pure, yellow ray
i love the penguin standing on the ice
i love the cat chasing the the mice
i love the nature.it's beautiful and great
beshrew a beholder who doesn't meditate
dedicated to: (Mohammad Hassan) .
july,2009 by Omar Ibrahim
omaribrahim-keats@hotmail.com
This poem is so beautiful! ! It deserves more then a 10.. Jenna
A poem on nature well written…thanks for sharing… 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
A wonderful poem full of happiness and great observations of nature and wildlife. 10++ and added to my favs. Thank you for sharing your well crafted poem sir.
Happy to read the mildly archaic language and the reference to Spenser! The 'ice' 'mice' lines spoil the whole, but a fine effort.
I really do like it, your sense of observation amazes me, great!
The beauty of nature is the beauty of the world. Even humans, who often times inadvertently destroy the landscape, and pollute the air, are a part of nature. Some humans are also very kind though and care for the Earth as best they can. Me, I walk outside, and see the beautiful little brook settled behind my home, and walk down the trail and all I can hear is the running of water, and the singing of the birds, and I am at peace... I believe you wrote passionately and truthfully. Thank you so much for your ingenuity... Marina Gasbey...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that's a wonderful poem. i can imagine every word