A Prayer - Haiku Poem by omar ibrahim

A Prayer - Haiku

Rating: 4.7

O God almighty,

sacrifice for you what then

if life is so cheap?

Dr Antony Theodore 12 September 2010

very good haiku. u are brnging in a note on the struggle of man to believe. sacrifice? ? God do need a sacrifice? are we living in the times of neanderthal men? u pose a big question regarding religious beliefs. thank you

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blank blank 07 September 2010

great poem. the question calls for some thought. its the best you've got. the best you can give. and there are great rewards for the one who sacrifices his life for his creator. 10+

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Zeinab Sherif 06 September 2010

well! it's good 2 start with & it's good 2 enlarge ur talent & discover ur skills.the question confused me but i liked it & i'm sure u'll be better.thanks for sharing.

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Amir Momeni 06 September 2010

wonderful i suggest you blyth and suzuki's books to read

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 06 September 2010

Hi Omar, i prefer to comment about the idea. It's a simple question that has many version of answer. Well, everybody has their own view about life.. but i think every life is worth a sacrifice, start at our mother who bear us and give birth to us. It's nice idea to ponder, tks for sharing

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S H 11 May 2023

Our life is mere a test, nothing more.

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S H 11 May 2023

Everything belongs to Him alone and we all will return to Him with our deeds. Good or bad.

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S H 11 May 2023

Almighty is free from all requirements, it is we who need Him.

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S H 11 May 2023

Great thinking, neither blood nor the flesh reaches Almighty, only what roaches is your intention...

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Ricky M 09 May 2023

Life is His gift to us, suffering is part and parcel, one should not get dishearten for good or bad. Just live upright, you will be held for your good and bad deeds.

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